Kia ora Tolati. What an awesome magnetic poem! I like how it rhymes. It reminds me of the song 'you are my sunshine.' Have you heard that? Don't forget to enter it in the slam using this form. Then you can visit this site to comment on other students' poems.
Kia ora Tolati, I agree with Phil that you have shared a fabulous magnet poem! Well done! It reminds me of all the lovely sunshine we have been having over these holidays and we really do love how it makes us happy. Have you been enjoying any water sports or swimming in the sunshine over Christmas or New Year? I look forward to your reply, Naomi (Manaiakalani Facilitator)
It is me Quein again a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I really enjoyed your thoughtful and positive poem. You have chosen some very powerful and positive words that relate to the summer. It is Fantastic to see that you put a lot of effort and thought into the different meanings that the sunshine can have for you in the summertime- Well Done!!!
I always enjoy summer as I enjoy spending time with my family and friends and we all get to enjoy the summer sun. What is your favourite thing about summer?
Keep up the Super work we look forward to your next blog post!!!
Kia ora Tolati. What an awesome magnetic poem! I like how it rhymes. It reminds me of the song 'you are my sunshine.' Have you heard that? Don't forget to enter it in the slam using this form. Then you can visit this site to comment on other students' poems.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tolati, I agree with Phil that you have shared a fabulous magnet poem! Well done! It reminds me of all the lovely sunshine we have been having over these holidays and we really do love how it makes us happy. Have you been enjoying any water sports or swimming in the sunshine over Christmas or New Year? I look forward to your reply, Naomi (Manaiakalani Facilitator)
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It is me Quein again a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I really enjoyed your thoughtful and positive poem. You have chosen some very powerful and positive words that relate to the summer. It is Fantastic to see that you put a lot of effort and thought into the different meanings that the sunshine can have for you in the summertime- Well Done!!!
I always enjoy summer as I enjoy spending time with my family and friends and we all get to enjoy the summer sun. What is your favourite thing about summer?
Keep up the Super work we look forward to your next blog post!!!
Ngā mihi,
Quein