Monday, 20 December 2021

My Poem slams

 

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  1. Kia ora Tolati. My name is Phil and I helped Dave design the tasks for the poetry slam. I really enjoyed your Kenning. Is it about you? I can't see the video on slide two. Do you know how to change the permissions? I'm excited to see your future poems too.

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  2. Hi Phil, yes the poem is about me. I have asked my brother Jabal to help me change the setting,so you can watch my video. Can you let me know if you're able to watch it now? Thanks Tolati.

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    1. Ka pai Tolati. Yes it works now. It was awesome to hear you perform your poem!

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  3. Kia ora Tolati.

    Great poem! Loved the video you included as well. I hope you keep working on the poetry slam challenges you are great!

    Keep up the awesome work!

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