Kia ora Tolati. Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem. They're all great but I love your Summer Learning Journey one. I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying it. Don't forget to enter your poem into the slam using this form. Then you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!
It is me Quein again a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. Wow!!! Ka mau te wehi! It looks amazing!! I am very impressed with the poems that you have created. You have chosen such powerful and well placed words to support the themes of your poems. It is Super Awesome to see that you had created themes for your poem. I really enjoyed the spiderman poem. You captured his qualities very well. I LOVE the poem about the SLJ and it is great to see that you are enjoying it. Overall you have written fantastic poems and I also can see that your blog post is clear, concise and engaging- Ka Pai!!! It is really good to see that you have developed your poetry skills and it is super great to see that you have put in a lot of thought and positivity in completing the post.
I think Spider-Man is cool. Did you know Spider-Man’s web dissolves within an hour and yet is strong enough to hold the Hulk!!! Is spider man your favourite superhero?
Do you have any tips for your fellow bloggers who would like to give poetry a go?
Keep up the Super work we look forward to your next blog post!!!
Chris here, again! Tēnā koe for getting involved in another task. You’ve done so many! How did you find this one, did you enjoy it?
These are all great! Really like the Spiderman one, have you had a chance to see No Way Home yet? The Hanzel and Gretel one is awesome, too. I think Gretel is equally strong as Hanzel, though!
The SLJ poem is so lovely, we’re really happy to hear that you enjoy it that much. Because- of course- this programme is about you guys, so its really important to know that it’s worth it for you! Good that you’re taking breaks as well, must remember this is holiday time as well!
Looking forward to seeing what you post over these last couple of weeks!
Kia ora Tolati. Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem. They're all great but I love your Summer Learning Journey one. I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying it. Don't forget to enter your poem into the slam using this form. Then you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!
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It is me Quein again a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. Wow!!! Ka mau te wehi! It looks amazing!! I am very impressed with the poems that you have created. You have chosen such powerful and well placed words to support the themes of your poems. It is Super Awesome to see that you had created themes for your poem. I really enjoyed the spiderman poem. You captured his qualities very well. I LOVE the poem about the SLJ and it is great to see that you are enjoying it. Overall you have written fantastic poems and I also can see that your blog post is clear, concise and engaging- Ka Pai!!! It is really good to see that you have developed your poetry skills and it is super great to see that you have put in a lot of thought and positivity in completing the post.
I think Spider-Man is cool. Did you know Spider-Man’s web dissolves within an hour and yet is strong enough to hold the Hulk!!! Is spider man your favourite superhero?
Do you have any tips for your fellow bloggers who would like to give poetry a go?
Keep up the Super work we look forward to your next blog post!!!
Have a Super Summer!!!
Ngā mihi,
Quein
Kia ora Tolati!
ReplyDeleteChris here, again! Tēnā koe for getting involved in another task. You’ve done so many! How did you find this one, did you enjoy it?
These are all great! Really like the Spiderman one, have you had a chance to see No Way Home yet? The Hanzel and Gretel one is awesome, too. I think Gretel is equally strong as Hanzel, though!
The SLJ poem is so lovely, we’re really happy to hear that you enjoy it that much. Because- of course- this programme is about you guys, so its really important to know that it’s worth it for you! Good that you’re taking breaks as well, must remember this is holiday time as well!
Looking forward to seeing what you post over these last couple of weeks!
Ngā mihi!
Chris